Jacob: You have a lot of good ideas about your magazine and you portray your ideas really clearly and in depth. One thing that particularly stood out, was that you wrote about incorporating new media in to your proposal.
Mark: You have clearly thought, in depth, about the releasing of your magazine. You have identified what sort of quality your magazine will have if it is produced once a week only. This is quite effective as this shows that you have understanding of the magazine industry.
Jess: You have researched what your magazine’s main competitors would be and what KERRANG! does that you wish to include in your magazine. However, you should do some more in depth research about smaller competitors as they may include some aspects in their magazine that big magazines like KERRANG! might not.
Hamzah Ehsan 